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Monday, May 4, 2020

WW2

WW2 is a historical event which I think is interesting, this is a story I made for fun. Enjoy!
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  1. Mrs Wing's ClassMay 4, 2020 at 11:57 AM

    Hi Oliver,

    Thank you for sharing this story. You have used some great vocabulary and I can imagine the gun rattling and how loud and scary it must have been during this time. I am watching a programme at the moment and your story took me back there. When I was reading I noticed some spelling mistakes which made it a little hard to read. Remember 'we're is short for 'we are'. Taking the time to fix up these errors will make it easier for those reading. I can't wait to hear the next part of the story.
    Mrs Wing

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